Monday, October 24, 2011

Nice way to start a Monday. . .

This morning I was thrilled to learn that I won first place in the Writing North Idaho Brilliant Beginnings Contest (link to pagel).Writing North Idaho is a great is a great writer's resource, which I would have told you even if I had not won.

The line I submitted is my introduction to the Midwife of Riversbend, one of the first major characters to be introduced in The Black King's Hall. That line and a few more follow:



Her long journey through grief was almost over.  The Midwife of Riversbend pushed her way through the crowds on the road to the Black King’s Hall, heedless of those around her except that they were in her way.  She had carried her burden too long to slow down now.  As she strode through a knot of chatting pilgrims she thought about the man she intended to meet.
Arrogant swine!
She wasted no time on apologies as she brushed by.  None was asked, for when others saw her they stood aside.  Anger and determination hardened her plain peasant face.
Fiendish tyrant!
Her fists were clenched and her arms swung stiffly as she shouldered her way past slowly moving travelers. 
Cold hearted murderer!
Although still of childbearing age, the Midwife of Riversbend was no longer a young woman.  Given her swift pace and apparent energy, one would have never guessed she had already been walking for the better part of two days.  But anyone looking closely would see evidence of a hastily planned and unpleasant trip.  She wore the rigors of her journey like the lines on her face, each one a hard-earned reminder of the trial her life had become.  Her coarse brown peasant dress and soft leather boots were covered with dust from the road.  Her blond hair looked as if it was once tied neatly back, but now most of it fell untidily to her shoulders.  The pack slung over her shoulder was more a farmer’s sowing bag than traveler’s satchel.  She had no time to borrow proper traveling gear from her neighbors or pack more than a bedroll and some simple provisions.  

Thursday, October 20, 2011

Where Have I Been?

If there is anyone out there who is wondering where I have been in terms of posting on this site, let's just say the Black King's Hall is closed for renovations. When I decided this book was finished, I happy sent it to several beta-readers and promptly got to work on volume two. But, when I was well into the first draft of what might be called The Dreams of Liana or The Lighthouse of Providence, some commentary on the BKH came rolling in. I don't have problem with the commentary. In fact, I have received such good feedback that I could not try to publish the Black King's Hall without believing it could be a much better book. So - it is back to the desk or the chair or wherever I happen to write that I go (did I mention I love having a laptop?).

Thank you all so much for your early encouragement. I really meant a lot. I will let you know when the Black King's Hall is ready for the light of day again. Until then, I will be posting some background information about Anvar, the world in which the story - this part of it anyway - takes place. Let me know what you think.